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Thursday 9 June 2016

Narrative Writting

Sprinting to swimarama faster than The Flash getting to the pool. As i entered i could hear people's screams echoing from the hydra slide seeing other people freezing because they lost their towel. My heart was racing because i could not wait to get into the pools or on to the gigantic hydra slide. Everyone was running around some people were slipping because they don't know how to read because they wanted to get to the hydra slide as much as i did. And then it started to rain but it didn't really matter because we were going to get wet anyway so it doesn’t matter. But for some dumb reason we were called to go to the inside pool and unlucky for us there we more than 50 people at the pools.



1 comment:

  1. Hi Toma,

    I really enjoyed reading your narrative writing story about going to the pool. Do you like to swim? I love it! I used to work as a lifeguard at a swimming pool in Canada when I was younger and it was so much fun! I still swim a little bit now that I live in New Zealand but not as often.

    Speaking of swimming, there are a number of athletes from New Zealand who are travelling to Rio de Janeiro, Brazil next month to compete in the swimming competition at the Olympic games. If you would like to learn more about these athletes and the Olympics, in general, please consider joining our Winter Learning Journey this holiday.

    To join all you have to do is log onto the Winter Learning website, click on the "Weekly Activities" tab, scroll down and choose an activity that interests you. You then blog about it on your blog site and I will read it, comment and give you points. You'll earn a certificate and a badge and, if you one of the 'Top 3 bloggers' you will also earn a great prize at the end of the holiday!

    I'll check back tomorrow to see if you've chosen to take up the challenge and join the Winter Learning Journey programme.

    Hope to see you online this holiday :)

    Cheers, Rachel

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