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Tuesday, 11 June 2013

Antarctica Narrative




P1: Introduction - characters, what is going on,
When, Who, What, Where, Why
A researcher is going throw the cold howling wind in Antarctica the coldest and driest continent on earth.He was trying to find the Scott base in the freezing Antarctica.The researcher was trying to find a place to stay inside and keep warm because he was so cold.Then he came out and he kept walking and walking and then he could see someone he was so happy but it was a big Emperor penguin




P2: Problem - what was problem?
Then the big Emperor penguin went because it knew that a big windy blizzard was coming.It was right the big windy blizzard did come it got colder and colder and colder until he almost friezed and then he got to the frozzing water and he was scared cause he thorught that a big killer whale or a leopard seal was going to come a get eaten.By the killer whale or the leopard seal and that he would be its dinner or its lunch or breakfast he starred to call out for help but no one heard him.
P3: Action - what happened straight after the problem?
A  leopard seal was swimming from under the water and then a killer whale came past he saw the killer whale but he did not see the leopard seal.The leopard seal jump out of the water and then the killer whale jump out to he screamed loud like a girl and.Then there some people were filming they were fighting

P4: Conclusion - How the problem was solved?

The people filming saw the researcher and the researcher saw them he said help and they saw him they stop there filming and went to go and get the researcher on the big boat and they went closer and closer and then he ran and ran to the steel boat and then they put the stairs down and then the researcher went up and up onto the boat and they took him to scoot base

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