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Thursday 27 June 2013

The Brainy Raccoon



Prompt.Write a story about a brainy raccoon who invents a spaceship to go to Pluto.

This is a story about a brainy raccoon that goes to pluto in a spaceship.The raccoon’s name was Johnny. He was brainier than a monkey and a orca whale together, he was too brainy for school that he skipped year 6 and became a doctor for St John. Then a few years later on his 16th birthday he became an astronaut it was his dream to become an astronaut.

He went to and astronaut school he shouted with excitement “this is awesome!!!!!” as he saw the spaceships flying into space to investigate the planet pluto.Then year 5 from pt england school came. Because they had a trip to the astronaut school then the boss of the  astronaut school his name was Mr Timmy.He was a nice man and said to us “come come I will show you around astronaut school” and he did.

For a special treat he gave the year fives Ice-Cream it was yummy then they saw the raccoon they all said “wow!!!” then it was the it was raccoons turn he was so happy to do his dream. But then there spaceship lost their power his dream was ruined he was very sad that his dream was over.His family saw because it was on tv he was sad they were sad every family member was sad.

Then he prayed to God so that all if the spaceships would work. Then something magical happened a light from the sky came and then everything went again and also the bus went to it was awesome everyone was filled with excitement. He dream came true and he could not wait to go to pluto he shouted “this is the best day ever”.

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