Toma Narrative Writing

We have been collaborating as a group to write this narrative about a farmer?

Toma P1. Once there lived a farmer who lived in the farm with his wife.They were going to the barber for a haircut. His name was Joey he was a silly farmer. He would always get bored because of his job, he was a trucker.

Datanian P2. When the trucker was driving he was falling asleep. He was going to a cliff, Joey was very tired and he was about to fall of the edge. But he got saved by a flying cow that he use to mock, it was a miracle!

Henry P3. So is wife came and picked him up from the truck. She picked him up and put him inside the house.When she put him inside he woke up and he said “What am I doing here? I don't remember you, ah get away from me.”

Maurice P4. Then when he woke up he had remembered that she was his wife, the girl standing there was his wife.He was so happy to see her again. Joey was filled with happiness once more.Then in the end they were both happy to see each other again.