HAVE YOU EVER HAD SHERBET POWDER BEFORE? or have had a HOMEMADE MARS BAR SLICE they are both delicious.
On Friday Me and my family went to the creek in panmure and we feed the eels with rotten meat and they were starving.Then after that my mum was playing a game she had to tag us with a blindfold on but she could hear us because the leaves sounded loud.After that I went and jumped in the middle of the creek and touched an eel and then we went home and I tired.
Then on the next day I woke and I was excited because I wanted to play my favourite game spyro year of the dragon 3 it is the best ps2 game in the world. Well I was playing it my mum was making a mars bar slice for lunch I was excited for that as well.3 hours later it was lunch we had shrimp noodles they are chilly to cool it down we had a drink of water.After we had eaten or chilly noodles we had our mom's homemade mars bar slice it was delicious then soon after I fell asleep.
The next day My mum made sherbet powder it is sour and so yum I was the first one to have it.After that we went for another walk to the creek and it was so cool because I grabbed on and there were way more but I caught a small. Then at dinner we had nutella toast,Milo,Choc malt nutrigrains and a cold coca then I went to sleep and woke up and it was the first day of term 2 THE END!
Hey Toma this is great work! I am Jack Roberts from the University of Canterbury studying to be a primary school teacher and it was so great being able to read your story. Awesome to see your literacy skills being presented in your story about your holiday. My favourite part was about spyro, I think its the best game too. I think its so cool to see how you have marked your paragraphs as well. Keep up the the good work.
ReplyDeleteKind regards, Jack.