Friday, 18 November 2016
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Tuesday, 25 October 2016
The Magical Tree (Writing Practice)
On Thursday we did a practise for our writing test in our paragraphs we had to have three different sentence types simple, compound and a complex sentences. Blue is simple, orange is compound and complex is pink.
Centuries ago there lived a young man named Peteli who lived in cargo village and it wasn’t that big. One day Peteli was walking to school and found a little apple lying on the floor from the apple tree but this apple was no ordinary apple it was glowing. Peteli was starving he hadn’t eaten in days taking his first bite his mouth was almost filled with apple juice eating the whole apple in five seconds and praying to god afterwards. All of a sudden the ground started shaking it was an earthquake Peteli wasn’t sure what to do he was paralysed, suddenly a massive crack opens up and swallowed everyone in cargo village no one but Peteli survived. The crack then disappeared and no one knew what had happened to caro village or that it even existed.
200 years after Peteli had awoken from his deep sleep and he still couldn’t believe what happened years ago. Peteli didn’t know what to do until one day a mysterious white bearded man named Dumbledore walked to Peteli and said “I know what happened centuries ago to your village and I am truly sorry.” Twigs started coming out of Peteli's eyes Dumbledore then said, “You have one wish Peteli.” Peteli was in shock, “The only people that know my name are my parent’s.” Peteli then said, “I wish that i could wish other people wishes that really need help.” All of a sudden Dumbledore hit the ground with his magical staff. “Your wish has been granted” and Dumbledore disappeared.
Peteli then wished if he could have a village named cargo village so they could keep him company if he was lonely. This was going to take a while because it wasn’t a small wish. So Peteli fell asleep and the next morning there were these kids climbing on him he was filled with joy. He laughed with happily the kids got scared and ran away calling for there mummy.
Centuries ago there lived a young man named Peteli who lived in cargo village and it wasn’t that big. One day Peteli was walking to school and found a little apple lying on the floor from the apple tree but this apple was no ordinary apple it was glowing. Peteli was starving he hadn’t eaten in days taking his first bite his mouth was almost filled with apple juice eating the whole apple in five seconds and praying to god afterwards. All of a sudden the ground started shaking it was an earthquake Peteli wasn’t sure what to do he was paralysed, suddenly a massive crack opens up and swallowed everyone in cargo village no one but Peteli survived. The crack then disappeared and no one knew what had happened to caro village or that it even existed.
200 years after Peteli had awoken from his deep sleep and he still couldn’t believe what happened years ago. Peteli didn’t know what to do until one day a mysterious white bearded man named Dumbledore walked to Peteli and said “I know what happened centuries ago to your village and I am truly sorry.” Twigs started coming out of Peteli's eyes Dumbledore then said, “You have one wish Peteli.” Peteli was in shock, “The only people that know my name are my parent’s.” Peteli then said, “I wish that i could wish other people wishes that really need help.” All of a sudden Dumbledore hit the ground with his magical staff. “Your wish has been granted.” Dumbledore disappeared.
Peteli then wished if he could have a village named cargo village so they could keep him company if he was lonely. This was going to take a while because it wasn’t a small wish. So Peteli fell asleep and the next morning there were these kids climbing on him he was filled with joy. He laughed with joy the kids got scared and ran away calling for there mummy.
Wednesday, 24 August 2016
Toma Usain Bolts Dream Narrative
On August 18th 2016 Usain Bolt has a dream about the future and what's going to happen in the 400m sprint in the olympics. Mrs Tele’a starts it all off “And their off, Izac’s off with a good start and sprints down lane 6 as Nga is close behind him.” Before Izac could say anything Usain Bolt sprints pass Izac. Izac started puffing and trips over. Izac was disappointed because he had let his country down. NOOOOO!!! Izac yelled. Mrs Tele’a was furious when Izac gave up because they were from the same country.
Back in the front Usain Bolt has already finished 300m and starts showing off to the audience when out of nowhere Nga passes Usain Bolt. Usain Bolt tries to grab Nga but Nga is too fast for him. The commentator’s focus on Izac “Izac is sulking at the back curled up into a little ball’’ Usain Bolt grabs out his secret energy. CHICKEN NUGGETS!!!!!!. Usain Bolt grabs a handful out and annihilate them Usain Bolt was now filled with energy. Usain Bolt suddenly gets red eyes and finishes 100m like nothing. But Nga wins. The stadium was filled with silence “He won Usain Bolt actually lost Nga is the winner 400m olympics.”
“AHHHHHHH!!!!!!.” It came to the time and Usain Bolt was nervous. But obviously Usain Bolt won by miles.
Thursday, 9 June 2016
Narrative Writting
Sprinting to swimarama faster than The Flash getting to the pool. As i entered i could hear people's screams echoing from the hydra slide seeing other people freezing because they lost their towel. My heart was racing because i could not wait to get into the pools or on to the gigantic hydra slide. Everyone was running around some people were slipping because they don't know how to read because they wanted to get to the hydra slide as much as i did. And then it started to rain but it didn't really matter because we were going to get wet anyway so it doesn’t matter. But for some dumb reason we were called to go to the inside pool and unlucky for us there we more than 50 people at the pools.
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